Conrad Rice

This is a very interesting piece of work. The way you talk about God in various ways in the first four paragraphs is very interesting, but what does it do ...

This a good beginning to what will hopefully be an even better story. I say that because there is some work that needs to be done on this story. I ...

Very good. You use excellent imagery and manage to get us right down there with the main character. That is a significant accomplishment, one that I still have trouble with. ...

A very good poem. I'm afraid I'm not good at reviewing these, but aside from the peaces thing that others have already mentioned it is very good. On a side ...

This was very unusual. I like the plot, and how it all comes back around again, but there's some stuff that's either out of whack or that doesn't work. In ...

This was very brilliant and witty. I'll emphasize the witty part again, simply because I liked that particular aspect of it. You really wrote a good story here. I've read ...

This is okay. Not bad, but okay. I would say something about hearing Mum about every other sentence, but you're from England, so you have an excuse. You mentioned something ...

What was this story about? Yes, I know it was about a woman who loses the ability to understand what's going on around her and is thrown into an asylum. ...

Review for the second part. This story really came together in this second portion. One thing I thought I'd ask about. There was a woman talking to Sarah's dad at ...

This was really good. I can see now what you were telling me when you reviewed my story. But anyway, really good. I liked the way you built and maintained ...

This was a good story, despite its sadness. I wish there was more to it than this. Maybe you could expound on her asking her dad to stay home. Maybe ...

This was a very nice story. The only thing I didn't like was its length. Is there any way you could expound and tell us more? Is there any specific ...

Very good. Since this is a prologue I won't make my usual complaint of tell me more, since more is forthcoming. Jace seems real enough for a fictional character, which ...

Very good sci-fi. I like the way Svet talks to himself, reminds me of some conversations I have had with myself. It really adds to his character and makes him ...

I have to agree with the person above me. Just what is going on here? Give us some context so that we can understand things. It is well written, I'll ...